Totally what every guy instantly thought of when they first saw the holodeck. Fun stuff.
I agree with Mr. Perkins, awesome story. There were a couple typos in the 2nd to last paragraph, though. Should be ‘a beautiful woman’ and ‘She was slowly combing her long black hair’. Other than that, all I can say is pure incarnate awesomeness.
Thanks for pointing out the typos. I depend too much on spell check which doesn’t notice improper use of correct spellings. I kind of had “Blade Runner” and “Star Trek” in mind.
Thanks for pointing out the typos. I depend too much on spell check which doesn’t notice improper use of correct spellings.
I kind of had “Blade Runner” and “Star Trek” in mind.
“Blade Runner” is exactly what I was reminded of, reading this. Great fic.
ditto the others.
John Perkins
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