I was hoping this was about golf as soon as I read the title. Bravo!

I love that this is in verse form, even if it is about golf. ;p Seriously, this was very well written. Good job.

enjoyable twist. I like it.

oh, very clever! I certainly wasn’t expecting that. Great work!

Very nicely written, great job!

Three strokes behind after four holes? Not off to a good start.
This was very fun and unexpected. I like.

I really like it. : ) Nicely written, good job. Thanks for entering!

Very cool.. I was wondering where you were going with it… nothing like a good Golf poem!
Fresh and new! I liked it.

Haha! Great poem and a great ending My dad would love it. First stanza is particularly lovely.