That ending is what I was waiting for: another emergence of those dreaded black figures and their ominous game of hide and seek. The first paragraph has a few issues, though. In the first sentence, ‘glared’. In the second, ‘it was alright’.

Oh my gawd this is good you are awesome. i knew you would bring us back your descriptive narrative is just off the lead rope it is the bees knees, the cat’s pajamas, finer than frogs hair. you rock oh yeah and i am creeped out.

I think I corrected my issues, but I may have created other issues. :/

It seems to me that you have a penchant for cemetery scenes. Awesome job on this one. I love how poor Mike Wazowski Sully feels incredibly awkward and tries to slip away.

annette better back i dont believe rosalyn is in the mood to play with her.lol
@john why did you have to bring googlie bear into it?

LoL.. I had to look up Mike Wazowski. I had forgotten about that one. I actually got the name while listening to Fiona Apple’s Sullen Girl, only somehow my character turned into a young boy and his nickname became “Sully.” (Mopey just seemed too Seven Dwarfish. ;D)

Jen, I love that song. The whole album is <em>awesome</em>. Very cool method of inspiration.<br />Trafalmadorian, Rare is the day when either my wife or I do not shout “Mike Wazowski” in our worst Boo imitation. It’s simply a part of my consciousness.

lol my why always goes “I dont know” like grrr from invader zim.

wife i meant lol

Great work Jen :)

Jenunqiue, “Sullen Girl” is one of my favorite songs. Ever. So I like Sully even more now, knowing your inspiration behind the name.