I love your description.

That’s what you get for walking outside in a thunderstorm.
Very well done piece.

Uh oh! Well, that’s what happens when you’re higher than the ground, outside, in a storm. XD I hope the character survived! Thanks for entering. : )

I like that you touched on everything sense in your description; it really puts the reader in the moment. From smell and texture of the rain to the sights and sounds of the lightning and thunder.. very well described.

And being struck by the very thing you love—now that’d ruin the moment for sure!!!