You could not have read my mind better on this one! I was hoping a certain police officer would arrive first to the scene. ;) But I wonder what’s on Paul’s record that’s got him squirming like that. Awesomeness!

Hey, great minds do think alike, amigo!

Haha civilians, that’s going to be interesting.

ohh no..

You got sequel. And it’s about to get ugly.

i hate it when i get sticks in my hair

Great bit of interaction here. Loved the dialog, and the “swallow my tongue” comment. I’m more of a slobberer than a tongue swallower, but I can somewhat relate. =P
I do have a problem with the italics on “going” in that second to last paragraph. It feels more like the emphasis should be on “you’re.” I think it reads better that way. I’m having a hard time putting the emphasis on “going.” Is it just me?

lol I absolutely loved the last line