oregon is so nice i would live there accept my exwife lives there

I like that you changed the POV from the original ficlet. Great sequel.

I love it, thanks so much for the sequel :-)

As Ana Cristina says above, I particularly like that you shifted the first person perspective to Sara; really nice touch.

Oh I’m so glad! This was my first sequel, so I was nervous about keeping the tone similar, even if I was switching POVs. The funny thing – I never thought of writing from his POV , cuz I wanted to know what Sara was feeling!

Hey, don’t be nervous sequeling. You did a great job keeping the tone and offering a new perspective to the mix.