Comments on Love and Loss (Unexpected Twist challenge) by Valley Fey/Pinprick

♠Ana Cristina♥

OK, that ending gave me chills.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:32.
John Perkins

That was unexpected. Unexpectedly awesome. What a twisted little girl.
Thank you for entering.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:32.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

Little sister is twisted! (landed should be land on her palm) Very good entry!
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:32.
thebetweenspace

Wow, that was a twisted ending. Very unexpected, very sadistic. She seems to like to squeeze the life out of everything. Tremendous entry into the challenge and wow.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:32.
Krulltar

Woohoo! Dani is the first truely evil character I’ve read on ficlets (there might be others, it’s just I haven’t seen them). Amazingly job, but i can only give you 5 stars ‘cause of the stupid ficlet meter won’t go higher.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:32.
Flute Loop<33

nice job!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:32.
ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

Yikes!!! That was awesome! Very scarey ending… loved it.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:33.
Ridcully Calvert

This is a really good entry.

Gives new meaning to the phrase “Twisted Sister”

LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:33.
OrangeOreos

That was amazing.

I’m glad I don’t have that kind of sibling.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:33.
NightMaiden

Oh, dear…I really got the shivers when I read that. Great job! What a twisted little girl…
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:45:33.