I first read this not knowing it was an entry to the challenge. When I noticed the tiwst, I thought “this should be part of my challenge.”
It was quite cool, and unexpected. Thank you for entering.

Like John, I didn’t notice this was an addition to the challenge. It works great with the challenge, and would make a great beginning to a standalone series.

ya.. i’d like to see a series come out of this.. good entry!

Wow, that’s great. I love it!
LoA