Stumbled onto this without knowing what’s going on. I’m interested to go back and find out. It’s well written, and the idea of rounding up people to ransom for oil is very intriguing.

Ah, now it gets interesting. I wonder what they use for fuel? [nod, wink]

Hey, I made it. So far you’ve got a nice series. It does kind of feel like you’re rushing through it at times though. I think the format kind of lends itself to the writer rushing through things. I know in the two series I’ve worked on there were times where it got rushed.
I think you have an interesting world here, with some neat characters. So, I think spending more time with them is a good thing.

Though you did say there are other storylines to this world, maybe those ones go deeper into the world and characters? I’ll have to look those up.

man this is good somehow i am reading backwards but i dig it like this