real shit!!! but you are going to get kicked off dang you didnt have bring out trick baby.

as a female the whole rental property sort of irked me.. but none the less.. it was a very colorful written story.

yeah, gotta say title was offensive, didn’t really connect with the character and glad you marked it mature,, It’s not to my taste, but good luck and all. a lot of mispelled words, made it a difficult read. sorry.

I’m also confused by the title as I don’t see where it fits in with the story. Though, I’m probably missing something.
However, I absolutely loved “sci-fi punky brewster lookin ass.”

I also found the title a little offensive… and I don’t really see how it connects.

I’m with Apostrophe on this… as a female, I found it a little irritating. It’s not really my style, but thanks for contributing to Ficlets…

…A note on the title- it’s a play on words parody of a song lyric. The last words of the prequel were “Queers to the left of me , junkies to the right…”the sequels tirtle follows “here i am stuck in the middle with jews”get it – a bad pun…
I hope it makes a bit more sense now (but it wasn’t ever supposed to be terribly logical, its kind of an inside gag for an audience of one)-sorry if i offended…

hey listen i know ya’ll wont believe this but this a real true story real talk i was there it really happened i swear. What should really be offensive is she answered to trick baby

hey ya’ll are not taking into account that chaka is a female.

hey how do i get back to the simone story oh never i found it