Well, what a gripping last sentence! I don’t see how she could hide being that skinny and ill from her parents. Mine would have had me hospitalized weeks ago! I feel for poor Ezekiel, such a tough situation to go through! I hope Ellie gets help in time!!
LoA

A good tale so far, with just a few mistakes (we’ll let the proof reader take care of them)
However, I doubt that she would have rosy cheeks. Sunken, more likely.