What?! Who would ever want Edward to leave? Even if I had gone through a painful 3 day transformation, I’d never want him to leave. Silly Bella. :) Though I must say I do love how ur doing this. Its quite wonderful.

Bella! Aww, Edward! You’re doing a brilliant job, Ana.

I like how you draw us into her dark, cold eyes and his fear. Well developed scene here.

I love how you’re doing this. Its a great way to hope about when Breaking Dawn comes out. Very well written.

Uh-oh. I sense something may not have gone as planned!

Great way to add to the suspense.