I want to cry from how awesome that scene is! I love how you show that he finally doesn’t have to worry about hurting her physically. Fabulous job!!!!!!! I beg you! Please keep going!!!

OK, I just might… I’m working on something in Word because I need to keep track of the word count. The contest doesn’t accept stories that are more than 5,000 words in length.

A contest? Well, anyway, I’m surprised that “new Bella” agreed to any kind of makeover, especially one done by Alice.

Fantastic line: I kissed her back just as firmly, reveling in the physical sensation for once rather than worrying about hurting her.