…. You can’t just leave me like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s creul!!!!!!! sequel pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =]

You’re very good at showing how your characters are feeling (i.e., the knot in her stomach, her gritting her teeth).

Sigh… I just read the title of the next and I’m already scowling.
dang it Kyle!