oooo.. that sounds like a really bad hangover. : (

and i just noticed that this is your first post!!! let me be the one to welcome you to the amazing world that is FICLETS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Seconding invisibilty’s comment!

Heartily we welcome you into our band of, er, writers!

And I like how you write. It’s descriptive, but not overly so. And you keep to the point.

Great job!