Definitely went grim on this one. Good job on the fairy tale ‘voice’.

Wow, a very gruesome ending. I guess his true love is still out there somewhere waiting to be pushed off a ledge.

@ thebetweenspace: rofl.
I thought this was a really great ficlet, terrifying and yet darkly comical. Two thumbs up.

Even if the contest was meant to start at the second ficlet, and you got some kind of “early start”… well, you did great. Dark, twisted and funnily scary. I congratulate to you, I’ve a sweet tooth for twisted endings

heh heh heh heh. niiiiice. very gruesome yet hilarious. :)
my kind of ficlet.

Haha…now that’s my kind of fairytale!