the king and his men, stole the queen from her bed, and bound her in her bones. the sea be ours and by the powr’s where we will, we’ll roam. yo ho, haul together, hoist the colours high. hieve ho, thieves and beggars, never say we die.

I sequeled!
Hope you like it!
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A female pirate is unique. She doesn’t seem to show the capacity for love… or she is too hardened to loss.

Nice simile, towards the end. I definitely like it.

I think she had the capacity for love, but when he spurned her we see the opposite emotion, and fairly enough. Great last line too.
LoA

If he’d only believed her, maybe he’d still be around. I heard there’s nothing more dangerous than a woman scorned.