oh my gawd she is off the chain i am jumping up and down in the rest stop truck stop i am stealing the internet from.

Wow, that’s some crazy stuff. Bumps up the intrigue level for sure. I wonder what the agreement is.

its an action packed sequel check out an evening in hades

See, I told you all redheads are crazy. It’s a proven, scientific fact. You can test it in your own homes if you dare let one near your house.
Back on topic… excellent. I think I’ve said this before but you have a very keen sense of intrigue, and beautiful writing style. This is an incredible piece on multiple levels.

Oh wow. I’m almost afraid to click on the sequel now.