Hm… mysteriousness.

Syntax is a bit messy; it should read “and it is that final memory of her,” so nix so the “with” and you’re golden. Good continuation otherwise.

I agree, this is a great continuation, assuming you nix the ‘with’. Fun little series we have here.

I like! I still wonder why she screamed.
LoA

I agree with Blu!!!
LoA

What did he decide to do?

Good job building up the tension!

I’m with Blusparrow, why was she screaming? You did a great job!