I love the time-travel aspect of it, and somehow you’ve created a very like-able character in a short time.
And it looks like you set this up perfectly for a sequel with the note at the end.

I love time travel like nothing else, so this is right up my alley. The first pgh is stellar.

Quiet, unassuming start to certain doom, cause really, how many time travel stories don’t wind up with dire consequences for time travel?

I’m dying to know what comes next. I’d like to sequel it myself but I’m really drawing a blank right now.

Rawr. That was supposed to have five stars with it. Now it does.

Alright, fine. You’ll just have to imagine the five stars since the computer is being stupid.

Sequel away, if you get the inspiration… And that goes for all of you.

hooah i agree with tbs