Love the last line. I can picture the chaos so perfectly. Can hardly wait for the next installment.

look your last story was the best of the series it made me look like i was drawing coloring books and you were painting Salvadore Dahlia over them with oil paints, I had to really step up this one to try to keep it from being anti climactic(spell check says that is right but it looks so wrong) you really are a Phenom With a capitol Phenom.

hey john when you are done with this go read Anna Cristina’s new pic the poem if you dont laugh..well you’ll laugh.

Wow, now this is some chaos. I loved the last line. Really interested to see where this whole thing goes.

Wow, chaos is the word of the day. Very cool scene.