It was a dream.

“Why don’t you come on in the back and get yourself something free?” ? Sheryl isn’t operating a whorehouse is she? Just kidding. On a side note, it does look like your italics markers are somehow off…

Ya, how come the italics on you isn’t working? That is a bit screwy. Oh well. FOR FREE ! The only thing he deserves for free is a trip to a jail.
LoA

Ya, how come the italics on you isn’t working? That is a bit screwy. Oh well. FOR FREE ! The only thing he deserves for free is a trip to a jail.
LoA

Hahaha!

Tbs, your comment made me laugh.

Anyways, as your unofficial official grammar editor, you switched tenses in the second paragraph.

Just switch will not for won’t.

Haha whorehouse.
And thanks, OrangeOreos. I like the thought of an unoffical grammar editor. Besides, my grammar sucks. I’d be screwed if I didn’t have spell check and all those things on WORD .

Yay for grammar editors. I am one myself, so I applaud all others. ;-) And Freedom, your writing is great. Give yourself more credit.