This is quite odd, in a very cool way. I like the presentation you have used. Very Twilight Zone-ish (which it really seems like you were going for). And since I share his unreasonable hatred for birds, I can also relate to his plight. However, I really think this could benefit from being broken up into paragraphs, with a blank line between them. Will make it much easier to read. And I think the last line could be touched up to have more weight and a better flow. Other than that, I enjoyed it.
John Perkins