Cool deal, man. Glad you finally got some inspiration on this series. Looking forward to what you come up with, and I’ll probably jump in again at some point where I don’t think I’ll hijack your storyline.
Few typos. In the middle, swiveled, near the end, whiskey, and also near the end…
Prince should probably be The Artist Formerly Known As

Ha, at Jon for the Prince joke… although I do have to admit I’m looking forward to the revelation of the Prince Protocol
BTW , glad to see you writing on Pillar again, I was wondering what had went with it ;)