Ach. Poor, creepy Felix.

I loved the descriptions in this ficlet, and how her name made him realize what he was doing.

Makes you feel for his loss, and hate him at the same time.

I love how you took a romantic story and turned it into a creepy stalker sort of thing, snapping away like the paparazzi, until he snaps out of it and screams her name, revealing himself.

Okay, if you get like five comments from me, sorry, but ficlets is lagging today. What I think I said… I love how you took a romantic scene and skillfully turned it into a creepy stalker sort of thing.

I love how you took a romantic story and turned it into a creepy stalker sort of thing, snapping away like the paparazzi, until he snaps out of it and screams her name, revealing himself.

Great stuff! I’m still around, by the way, just been busy…

Completely takes it in a different direction, while retaining much of the same intensity. I wonder where she’s looking at, if not in Felix’s direction.

she’s probably spotted some cute guy jogging with a puppy. :)

love the details in this. really great