Very cool story, love the way she feels for her Grandmother and her mom.. and the ashes, sequels should be interesting. you created 4 good characters here.

This feels very reminiscent of an Ed Burns movie. Quirky characters, simply displayed for our enjoyment. Well done sir.

Great job getting across the personality of your narrator. Very funny and poignant/bittersweet throughout.

The last line is my absolute favorite.

The last line is my absolute favorite.