I like it! You are doing great with the old language style! keep it up!

this is beautiful, little bro!

Very interesting and what a change of tone from your normal writing style.
I like the way you gave it a “period” feel.

Thanks guys, I’m enjoying this project a lot.

Already been said, but it’s a testament to your talent that you can so easily move from the cyberpunk of your other series to this, when the two seem diametrically opposed.
The language feels overly flowery in the manner that it should, given my narrow experience of the genre. So far, it seems the experiment is a success.