Nice story, sweet and fun. I like it.

Why does this part remind me of Twilight?
To ruin the moment, he would start questioning me. I guess it’s important he really knows me but it was annoying.
;)

I like his comment on how everything she thinks is played out on her face. Great detail.

Hah, Twilight. I totally agree, Ana. And tbs, my old boyfriend actually said that to me.
:)

Haha, Twilight. I know what you mean, Ana. Hey, have you read The Host?

Yes!! I liked it OK, but not as much as Twilight. Why? It didn’t have Edward. :p I’m such a cheesehead. I even made my own website for Twilight so you know I’ve gone to the dark side.
http://thedangermagnet.blogspot.com/

Haha, I’ll check it out. And Edward is the BEST part :)

lol, I like this romantic moment here. So cute!
LoA

Man, The Host was better than Twilight…

Except the ending. I hate easy-to-predict endings…

Back on to topic!

The last line was perfect. Can’t wait to see what happens.