At least give him the pleasure of reminiscing about his dad over tea! Where’s her hospitality? :) I’m glad she yelled ‘wait’.

Really neat idea for a story. Very imaginative without gimmicks or fantastical elements.

I’m also glad she told him to wait. Very natural dialogue here.

o.k. so i read this totally memento style(backward) but i love it- this beginning was very surprising to me , i will definitely eagerly await the next installment