Awesome sequel. This is exactly what I got from the original; a moving away from childhood in general, and how it will inevitably happen to all of us. The line, “I think, therefore I pout” was bloody brilliant.
And the last line was very funny, and unexpected.

I just changed a word in the last line… I wasn’t sure if the actual phrase is “to be beaned” or “to be beamed.” So, I went with smack. A good all around verb. ;)

Beaned is the proper word, but it’s usually a consequence of an intentional action. For example, “I beaned the poor schlub on the bicycle in the head with a water balloon.” Smack is good if it simply fell off the tree, if it was thrown by a belligerent squirrel or something, then beaned works very well.

Alright, that made me change my verb again. ;D

Absolutely lovely. Very contemplative and quiet with a humorous ending to it that could go a lot of ways.

It was great how you kept going with the same “I wish I could be a kid again!’ theme, and then, put a nice little twist in there!

A great sequel. Now to see where THX took it…

I loved this sequel! It opens up a whole fantastical world of possibilities.