Awesome.

Simply, purely awesome.

you transitioned her simple train of thought and speaking extremely well.

Good job.

This is wonderful. I think you did a fantastic job of keeping the theme and style of my prequel, and I love the introduction of the Teddy bear. As a child I had a stuffed bear that I named Ted, middle initial E, so this brought back memories of that one-eyed companion.
You absolutely made my day, and wrote a wonderful ficlet as well. Thank you very much.

Lovely job, it definitely flows from the prequel to this one very well. And I’m glad the main character has somebody to talk to. They really need it.

Most excellent!