Way to leave ‘em hangin’. Clear and well written too!

Nicely written, and I love the ending.

nice, yes love the ending.

Clean in language, cleverly comes around on itself, compact of course, yet feels bigger than it is. Works great as it is, or could be a compelling opening to something larger. Well done.

C’est parfait.

the butler did it . . . or will.

haha…beautiful. and funny picture too.

If the butler didn’t do it, he knew about it.

Intrigue and suspenseful. the proper british butler with a deady mysterious secret. Well written fast paced, wish you would sequel it.