Nice, very suspenseful, leaves you wondering.

Oh, hi. I wrote you a sequel

I thought this was great. Good show, man!

Aha. Very nice.

I liked this entire story. You use great imagination and descriptions. And the addition of Cynthia was a superb idea.

Also, thank you for the making of this site. It is so awesome. I love the whole idea and the ability to do segments of stories and get feed back. It has helped me so much already.

Nice continuation of the original.