Comments on A Hero's Burial by Kevin Lawver

Saint Chuck

This is sad, but great descriptions too, not overdone. Nice work.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:33:56.
YodaOnCrack

Nice ending – well done! A+
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:33:56.
Sailor Emo

this one made me cry, seriously. =*(
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:33:56.
Kevin Lawver

Sorry, but that was kind of the point. It’s all YodaOnCrack’s fault…
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:33:56.
fireline12

Really sad, but well done.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:33:56.
killorbytes

Very nicely done, I agree with Saint Chuck. I definitely got a little choked up (although, with 2 kids that seems to happen more often now). Well done.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:33:56.
T.F. Torrey

Beautiful.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:33:56.
Laine the Grey

Absolutely wonderful.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:33:56.