I love it, kinda sounds like my ancestors, but they gave up and returned to Germany, France, and England. I’m from England, so I can sort of relate to this, I say the pledge in the class room because i love this country, but i’m not a citizen.

it’s funny. The first part made me laugh.

The first part is pretty funny. The only nitpicky thing I have to say is you wrote “Mi mama” when it should be “my.”

Mi is my in Spanish..

Great job, although it was a tad cynical. Ah, well, I loved it anyway.

Lol. love it! You ar e a great write, this story has a lot of potential.

i give saint chuck props

I liked this.
LoA