Continuing from my previous comment, this ficlet should start with Tom stood up and… Also there’s a slight name change in the first line. Is Coleman’s first name Jason or Jamaal? Billy’s reaction to Jason and Mindy is a bit foreboding. I want to see what happens there…

Yes, I can see where you’re coming from. It’s part of a short story I’ve already written called Lost Tears and it’s hard to break it up and place it on ficlets. Here’s a link to the entire thing, uninterrupted…
http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=211797

It seemss like he waas a really good guy. I like this little series.
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Well thought out scene there with the kneeling and hand holding.

The entire story is quite good. The first ficlet in this series does a suburb job of setting it up, and provides a nice teaser intro for the story, but the these last 2 ficlet sequals don’t do it justice.

The entire story is quite good. The first ficlet in this series does a suburb job of setting it up, and provides a nice teaser intro for the story, but the these last 2 ficlet sequals don’t do it justice.

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