I really like the way this series is progressing so far. You have an interesting cast of characters here, and now this turn leaves me wanting to read more.

I agree with BARomero. Didn’t see this coming. Very interesting.

It’s hard to post bits and pieces of this shorty story, but thanks for the encouragement. Here’s a link to the entire thing; it’s called Lost Tears

http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=211797

He brother stayed there for two days! Once again he must of been some really great guy.
LoA

It’s a neat idea, though it wound up kind of quick from your careful pacing of the other pieces to a quick retelling of the larger effect of this small incident.