I liked the little detail of her feet dangling as she sat on the star.

Very nice!

Thx!
LoA

Interesting. Open to possibilities. Nice descriptions.

This is getting pretty interesting! Is she really all alone?
LoA

I like the imagery.
Only one thing, it’s “strangely,” not “strangly.”
(Sorry, I’m a really picky editor.)

wow, this is a really cool thing going here! off to the sequel!

wouldnt that make your butt hot , swingin on a star? good twist 3.97 stars