You seemed to skip into 1st person in the 6th paragraph. I would either switch that into third person, or italicize it to make it appear that she’s thinking.
why is everyone trying to kill this little girl? i am about to have to take someone hostage for fear for this little girls life…5.0 stars for a great plot twist again this is starting to look like your M.O
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