I loved this line, “I have a couch, if you need some place to sleep. But, I have no story to add to yours.â€? This says so much about her character.
By the way, where you write about his hands moving quickly, it should read “too” quickly.

I liked how you let them get acquainted but kept both of them a bit prickly.

very true to life- i think i would definitely let this kid couch surf-i think i have let this kid couch surf