Very imaginative explanation or more detailed characterization of her fall into eccentricity, the start of the oddity that Yoda’s character meets in the next ficlet.

Rather rambling and one big paragraph made it hard to read. quirky though.

I agree with M. Paul Regret – some judicious spacing ought to help the pacing in this fic and I’d actually separate the second pgh into 2-3 pghs.

The backstory was quite interesting indeed!

I agree with M. Paul and Ana, spacing is needed, and perhaps some “fillers”.
I didn’t feel like everything fit together and you need to try to work on the flow of your ficlet.

Formatting ficlets takes a little practice. I like the direction you took with the prequel – interesting and told in a compelling voice…