I think I would have liked to have seen a little detail in this scene. Put her under the golden beam of a streetlight, fighting for space with the moths. Dress her up in torn fishnet stockings and a leather miniskirt.
Overall, I enjoy a good hooker story, but you didn’t do enough here to set the scene. I don’t get enough of the mood you’re trying to convey with such sparse detail.

i have to agree with John—more detail in the setting would have added a lot to each of the stories.

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