ohmy!
this has sparked the curious part of me.
that’s a very sad situation, but hey, it happens.why not awknowledge it!
i like it.keep it up.
kudos.

Reading through the whole series, I see that you kept them short to spring this last line at the end. I still think you could have done more with setting the mood without giving away the ending.
It’s a well done attempt at a tragic story, that I think just a little more flavor to the language could have kicked up a notch.

wow.. the last line almost scares me.
thank you jesus i don’t live in the city.
=]

Wow, thanks for all the comments, people! I’ll definately try to add more detail to each of the stories.