something happened with your last line, it’s not your fault and i’ve seen it happen before, but check it out because we can only see half of the last line.
anyway.
i love the feeling of desperation portrayed here, how you said, “She need it.” and then said, “I needed it.” was a good idea to go with the feeling here.
=]

This is the last line

I didn’t know if he would be back but for that night I would feel something.