i love how you changed the mood here, at first i wasn’t very fond of the critic for not liking her songs, i mean it’s thee Mariah Carey, but then at the end i really like that she broke down and changed her mind, and you told the story nicely.
also there a few grammatical errors here, and i would rephrase the first line because it’s a bit confusing.
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This was good. Though, as One Time, One Chance said, there were a few errors. “Brung” should be “brought” and I think for the song you meant “Fly Like A Bird.” But overall, very cool change of mood and neat ficlet.