Very, very good.

agreed, very poetic and well-written.
i would loveee to see more of this.
fantastic stuff.
=]

Marvelous poetry. Not quite sure why it’s marked mature, but very good none the less.

thankyou very much.
see what happens at like 1:30 in the morning?

i lovee the repetition in the poem, i really like to do that in poems i write too. this is very well written. good job. 5 star +

i really like this =) it is indeed very poetic but it’s not cheesy like a lot of ones are. Good job girly =)