Where you italicize Sigourney’s thoughts, you should remove the quotation marks so as to distinguish them from the rest of the dialogue. Also, I don’t think you meant to italicize Tasha’s lines.
Other than that, it’s great.

Wait, I just realized, that it’s all part of the dialogue (it was a little confusing to follow). Did you mean just to italicize the “I” in Sigourney’s first spoken line? If not, that might work better.

I’m with Ana on the italicizing muddle, but their interaction is cute, even if they have fallen into a comfortable style of banter rather quickly.

Disjointed and hard to follow.

Yes, Ana, only the “I” was supposed to be italicized, but for whatever reason, it did some weird thing. Let’s blame Kevin.

LOL , when in doubt, blame Kevin, huh? Actually, he’s no longer at the controls of this site, so we can just blame the site itself.
And I disagree with Wyatt Aapr – it’s much better than a two-star, sir!
I hope you sequel this!

O.K. the italics suck,and i’m alittle confused as to tasha’s gender-but i find the cynicism implied by assuming the guy burnt down the house right off the bat- it’s absolutely real and human – love it and am reading the prequel now