Good job taking the story a step further. Now I’m curious too as to whether or not she is a nun after her come-back line: “If you have any respect whatsoever for the Lord and for all women that are his creation, you will leave me in silence and solitude.â€?

Really great lines in this one. I like how you’ve given my utterly slimy lothario at least some sense of doubt and his own impropriety.

X-) “Are you sure you’re not a nun?” I love it!

Lots of possibility here. Sequeled!

Oh my God. She’s gonna kill him.
LoA

He’s hitting on a woamn who obviously just wants to pray and reflect, yeah local jerk is the right word.. and yet i feel the tension between the pair will end in love..