Mon Dieu! That was hot. “Expelling his mind into her ear.” I like that line very much.

Quite romantic.

Agreed, this was smoking hot. One tiny correction: in the French, it should read “belle” as he’s saying this to a woman.

Beautiful scene and wonderfully written. More than a good plot or story idea, it’s the writer’s little descriptive nuances that cause a story to stand out. IMHO , the use of the word “hard” in the last line was the perfect nuance to this amazing moment.

Beautiful scene and wonderfully written. More than a good plot or story idea, it’s the writer’s little descriptive nuances that cause a story to stand out. IMHO , the use of the word “hard” in the last line was the perfect nuance to this amazing moment.