Good continuation, still very much in the spirit of the prequels. Fun read.

Good job balancing the insanity and reality. A few missed words here and there, I think, but a very fun character. I loved the line about the pawnbroker’s assurances.

Sorry. I just wrote the gunfighter2 before I found your sequel. Had I found it first I would have followed your lead, but on the other hand your sequel could fit in anywhere.